Shives's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elvis gets sick. v1.1]

Great for a first movie.

For your first movie its far more advanced then most, so you get points for that.

You might want to fix a few things either for your next movie or even this one (dont resubmit just go into your user profile and give it the new file). You have echo on for the whole sound file.. I can only guess it was a mistake. Would make your movie twice as good if you took echo off as you cannot understand what elvis is saying.
The puking is the plot of your movie.. right? I might of missed the real plot (again the echo is on). You definetly have some talent as you are willing to put some time into your movies.. something most creators abuse.

The sound file with people yelling on the end was annoying! Just telling you this to try and help your rating.

I found the puking excessive, but that is just my opinion and there are some sick people on newgrounds so I am sure they will like it :)


Anyways, great first movie. And take my comments as insults but rather helpful hints for your next movie.

[Bobby's New Friend]

What the Fuck? Why isnt this Number 1?

this movie got 2.38. I just lost ALL faith on Ng viewers. It gets an Average overall rating: 9.25/10.00 and all the reviews rant and rave about how AMAZINg it is... then who is voting so low? People jealous of this kids abilities? I THINK SO! Chris is the best animator on this whole site.. better then the actual NG guys. I think its time to make votes REQUIRE reviews because it might make people think twice before giving a movie composed of a stolen sound byte from the net and a few badly drawn and animated graphics a 3.5 and giving a movie of this caliber a 2.38 for no reason!