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I hope you make more...

When I saw the intro and title I figured it was just another poorly done bitching. But I have to say I liked it and hope you do make more episodes. Its important to re-think what the portal is capable of. Is just a forum to put up funny stuff others have created, is it just a place for big companies to put their best stuff to get their main site hits? Perhaps. But I like to think of it as a place of free-thought where you can get your movie/message to a large amount of viewers.

Great for a first movie.

For your first movie its far more advanced then most, so you get points for that.

You might want to fix a few things either for your next movie or even this one (dont resubmit just go into your user profile and give it the new file). You have echo on for the whole sound file.. I can only guess it was a mistake. Would make your movie twice as good if you took echo off as you cannot understand what elvis is saying.
The puking is the plot of your movie.. right? I might of missed the real plot (again the echo is on). You definetly have some talent as you are willing to put some time into your movies.. something most creators abuse.

The sound file with people yelling on the end was annoying! Just telling you this to try and help your rating.

I found the puking excessive, but that is just my opinion and there are some sick people on newgrounds so I am sure they will like it :)


Anyways, great first movie. And take my comments as insults but rather helpful hints for your next movie.

The idea behind the movie.

Some have complained that its to hard to pull the meaning out of this movie but when I viewed it the first time I understood immediately its message. Right from the crack in the foundry window. Perhaps those that dont comprehend its meaning have never had a day in their lives that you would rather be dead. Continuing on would be meaningless torture, if it wasnt for the fact that you knew there was other things beyond that day. The crack in the window represents the welders want to escape. He is so drained from his everyday schedule that this longing to escape his life grows into a need. He builds a bird that can just fly away (very poetic). He quits his job and the writing on the foundry shows that he isnt just doing this on a whim, he fully intends to NEVER come back. Where he goes from there is up to you... its like questioning the viewer. Asking "where do you want to be, what do you want to be doing with your life?".

Wonderfully poetic and a message that isnt throwen in your face. The fact that some dont get it might tell us more. I think those that dont get it will be the ones that stay at the job and will continue to do the mindless labour for those of us that do grasp it.

I created a flash movie about violence and its real cause called "black&white to red". Only because I could look beyond what is obvious and what I have been told could I find the real reason or at least MY opinion. Something everyone should try, everything you are told look at its opposite before accepting it as the truth.

AC

What the Fuck? Why isnt this Number 1?

this movie got 2.38. I just lost ALL faith on Ng viewers. It gets an Average overall rating: 9.25/10.00 and all the reviews rant and rave about how AMAZINg it is... then who is voting so low? People jealous of this kids abilities? I THINK SO! Chris is the best animator on this whole site.. better then the actual NG guys. I think its time to make votes REQUIRE reviews because it might make people think twice before giving a movie composed of a stolen sound byte from the net and a few badly drawn and animated graphics a 3.5 and giving a movie of this caliber a 2.38 for no reason!

Hi. Hope you enjoy my stuff. Perhaps I will release more of my animations, later.

Aaron C @Shives

Age 43, Male

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Joined on 5/31/00

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